I’m back

Greetings folks!

It’s been a very long time since my last post. Life has been busy, but I felt the urge again to dive into the pool.

I figured I would start with one of my favorite challenges – #TankaTuesday. This week’s challenge is to pick a moment in your day and describe literally or abstractly how I feel about it, and how it affects me.

This form of poetry is tricube. It’s a three-line, three-stanza poem where each line contains exactly three syllables.

So here it goes…


A spring evening in Michigan

Soft breeze blows
At once warm
now to cool

Distant owl
hoots to mate
Fly with me!

The sun dips
velvet skies
settle in


Thanks for reading!

Tater Tot

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14 responses to “I’m back”

  1. willowdot21 Avatar

    I can feel you slowing down with evening shadows and the cat! Welcome back we are pleased that you have joined us ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

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    1. Life is a dark ride Avatar

      Its good to be back. ๐Ÿ™‚ I’m going to make an effort to at least do this challenge every week. I was having so much fun when I started, but life got in the way. I’m sure that happens to the best of us.

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        it happens to the best and the worst of usโ€ฆit happens to all of us. Just remembered you are here for pleasure not to stress yourself out .. we all live busy lives . ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

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  2. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    This was a lovely evening, and a nice way to slow down.

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  3. brazannemuse Avatar

    I love how I can feel the day turning to nightโ€ฆ Aww your cat looks just like my first cat I had in my own very first home ๐Ÿ’žSuzanne

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    1. Life is a dark ride Avatar

      Aww, tuxedo cats are the best. Tater Tot is a very charming boy, but you have to watch him because he likes to show affection back, but doesn’t realize the length or sharpness of his claws! He has very impressive murder mittens.

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      1. brazannemuse Avatar

        ๐Ÿ˜‚. I love that expression โ€œimpressive murder mittensโ€ you must use that in a poem!

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      2. Life is a dark ride Avatar

        I will definitely have to! Seven syllables so it has the second line of a haiku written all over it. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      3. brazannemuse Avatar

        Thatโ€™s what I thought! I look forward to reading it โ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. yvettemcalleiro Avatar

    Beautiful poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro ๐Ÿ™‚

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  5. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

    What a lovely description of your day! Welcome back! ๐Ÿ’™

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    1. Life is a dark ride Avatar

      Its good to be back!

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